This is your life I liked it
Actually, the line from fight club is "This is your life, and it's ending one minute at a time."
I think that there is a little resemblance to the respective Chemical brothers track, but seeing as this is just (or at least sounds like) MIDI and a sam-like voice synthesizer combined, i'd have to say that this is quite impressive :)
i definately get a sense of the chaos that you must be going through right now, the stress.. it's definately nice to see people express their angst in a more tasteful way instead of some others i could name.. oh, and i have to apologize, i accidently hit 3 instead of 4 when i was rating it. :(
just one suggestion.. try using a program like cooledit pro (or adobe audition, now ¬¬) and download some samples (or make your own :D) and do the voice-overs yourself.. the midi sound is not very flattering, nor is the fake voice. but i can see why you might keep the voice.. anyhow, very nice work.